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just64helpin
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I was gonna post an original piece to show off, but I'm not sure if auditions need remix-type stuff or not. Instead, here's part of hip hop piece I threw together based on the SM64 merry-go-round music.
*earlier version removed*
The drum sequence isn't quite developed yet, and most of the ambiance I conceptualized isn't in yet, but still...
EDIT: This is more of what I had in mind...
*later version removed*
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| Tue Apr 01, 2008 1:11 pm |
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Audix
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| Tue Apr 01, 2008 1:32 pm |
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just64helpin
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New link is up.
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pu_freak
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Hmmm.. this sure has potential. Indeed, the drums are crappy and it needs more body to it, but the start is good. I'm ust curiosu what you're going to do with this next... I would assume you add another melodic line right?
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| Wed Apr 02, 2008 3:38 am |
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Nutritious
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Ok, taking a listen:
-Really not feeling the claps/snare off the bat, but that's been mentioned. IMO this needs a really thick, heavy beat to drive it along - distorted and overdrive, etc.
-Synths are ok, just as mentioned before, need more development.
I actually think you have a good base idea here so far that has a lot of potential for more development. It just needs some more work to let it take shape.
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Scaredsim
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I find this horrible.
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| Thu Apr 03, 2008 7:31 am |
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just64helpin
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The buildup in my ear cleared somewhat, so I updated the piece.
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| Thu Apr 03, 2008 6:05 pm |
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Audix
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I dunno, dude, there's still a lot of room for improvement. With the "fairly" minimal arrangement that you have going here, your production is going to have to be great to make up for it. Do you use FL perchance?
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| Thu Apr 03, 2008 10:02 pm |
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just64helpin
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Do you use FL perchance? |
Yeah.
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| Thu Apr 03, 2008 11:52 pm |
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Nutritious
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Do you use FL perchance? |
Yeah. |
I smell collab
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| Fri Apr 04, 2008 6:16 am |
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Audix
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Nah, more like just giving him an idea of what we're looking for, maybe he'll learn something from it. As it stands, Fishy and I aren't really feeling it.
just64helpin, you can send it to me at g_michalec@yahoo.com if you'd like.
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